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Write A 1000 Word Of Ghost Story

i will provide a beta reading critique for your story, from a basic review to a full critique, based on the package options you choose.
If you just want an opinion then the basic option is your best bet.
If you want a more in-depth review going over each chapter, then standard is a good option. I'll provide commentary on pacing, characterization, favorite parts, least favorite parts, thoughts on each scene, anything that's confusing/unclear, how enjoyable the chapter is, eagerness to read the next and any predictions.
If you want more help with your story, then the premium critique can help you figure out the strengths and weaknesses of your work. In addition to everything in the standard package, I'll complete a 4 page rubric that analyzes characters, dialogue, emotion, plot, pacing, stakes, setting, technique, style, etc. as well as commentary on each section.


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